Some minor things threw me off in the beginning, but once I saw the baby on the ground I realized what was going on (especially since you pitched it to me verbally earlier). So when I read it threw a second time the story was really good, the pacing worked really well. But for coming into it the first time, I had a hard time reading things, probably just because they were so loose. The only one I'm still unclear on now is the bottom right panel on the second page.
It seems like a lot people are having a problem reading the first two page, I try to redo the first two page, and repost everything in a slightly larger format.
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These are awesome Gia! Can't wait to see the design of your werewolf!
Yo Gia,
Those look cool, but a little hard to read because of the size.
Can you email some larger jpegs to me?
Some minor things threw me off in the beginning, but once I saw the baby on the ground I realized what was going on (especially since you pitched it to me verbally earlier). So when I read it threw a second time the story was really good, the pacing worked really well. But for coming into it the first time, I had a hard time reading things, probably just because they were so loose. The only one I'm still unclear on now is the bottom right panel on the second page.
It seems like a lot people are having a problem reading the first two page, I try to redo the first two page, and repost everything in a slightly larger format.
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